I created my first draft, and I am happy with the way it's looking so far. I believe that I have used a wide variety of camera angles and editing techniques. I will gather feedback that will help with my production and final product. Feedback I asked for my first wave of feedback on google forms, and I asked a series of questions that will hopefully help me improve upon my first draft. I successfully gathered 11 responses on my survey, this is what they said. The first question I asked was whether or not my documentary met the brief. Thankfully, all eleven people said yes. this was really reassuring, because I am glad to know that I spent my time effectively. I deliberately spoke about content creation in Sunderland, so my documentary would meet the Sunderland Culture brief. Meeting the brief is also a big part of professional practice, so I am pleased that my audience feel that I have met the brief. So, I also wanted to know if my product was long enough, especially s...